Open Field - Edit 1

[Wjames]

White pasture lambs
lie with closed eyes
in damp morning grass,
breathing fresh spring
and budding flower.

They rise without finesse,
tottering towards the shepherd
with legs wide apart,
navigating the earth 
with care.

First Version:

White pasture lambs
bathe in rainbow,
lying with closed eyes
in damp morning grass,
breathing fresh spring
through the nose.

They rise without finesse,
tottering towards the shepherd
with legs wide apart,
navigating the earth
with no procedure.