Open Field - Edit 1
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White adheres
a soaked spectrum,
dark light seeps through
liquid new tangibility,
air is life
centered and grounded.

The multitude,
grasping for cause and meaning
as two sides of one coin,
wandering
nowlessly.



That's my interpretation.


I had considered a prosaic critique; but found that reductive.
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Messages In This Thread
Open Field - Edit 1 - by Wjames - 07-10-2023, 04:33 AM
RE: Open Field - by rowens - 07-11-2023, 05:59 AM
RE: Open Field - by TranquillityBase - 07-11-2023, 06:51 AM
RE: Open Field - by brynmawr1 - 07-11-2023, 12:32 PM
RE: Open Field - Edit 1 - by Wjames - 07-12-2023, 02:01 AM
RE: Open Field - Edit 1 - by TranquillityBase - 07-12-2023, 09:58 PM
RE: Open Field - Edit 1 - by Wjames - 07-18-2023, 01:27 AM
RE: Open Field - Edit 1 - by Lizzie - 08-03-2023, 07:38 AM
RE: Open Field - Edit 1 - by Wjames - 08-03-2023, 08:52 AM



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