07-30-2023, 09:04 PM 
	
	
	(07-30-2023, 10:55 AM)busker Wrote: I like the detail of ‘boxwood’ - it grounds the poem in reality.True story. Sometimes a simple observation is easy to put into words. Seems odd to even claim it as mine since it popped out fully formed- took less than 5 minutes to write. And that happens very rarely. But I'll take it when it does.
The last line is a clever reveal.

 

 
