Small Victory
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(07-30-2023, 10:55 AM)busker Wrote:  I like the detail of ‘boxwood’ - it grounds the poem in reality.
The last line is a clever reveal.
True story. Sometimes a simple observation is easy to put into words. Seems odd to even claim it as mine since it popped out fully formed- took less than 5 minutes to write. And that happens very rarely. But I'll take it when it does.
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Small Victory - by Mark A Becker - 07-30-2023, 01:34 AM
RE: Small Victory - by brynmawr1 - 07-30-2023, 02:03 AM
RE: Small Victory - by Mark A Becker - 07-30-2023, 02:47 AM
RE: Small Victory - by Kynaston Levitt - 07-30-2023, 04:47 AM
RE: Small Victory - by Mark A Becker - 07-30-2023, 05:43 AM
RE: Small Victory - by busker - 07-30-2023, 10:55 AM
RE: Small Victory - by Mark A Becker - 07-30-2023, 09:04 PM
RE: Small Victory - by busker - 07-30-2023, 09:19 PM
RE: Small Victory - by rowens - 08-01-2023, 05:45 PM
RE: Small Victory - by Mark A Becker - 08-02-2023, 03:02 AM
RE: Small Victory - by rowens - 08-02-2023, 03:34 AM



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