08-02-2023, 03:02 AM
Good observation rowens. ‘the’ boxwood and ‘the’ dog would’ve de-personalized this.
I’ve written so many syllabic poems, that I hadn’t noticed that this was 6 per line until after I wrote it. The rhymes just easily fell into place, too. If I could just get more poems to pop out like this one did I could save myself a lot of time. But that would take a lot of fun out of it, too.
I’ve written so many syllabic poems, that I hadn’t noticed that this was 6 per line until after I wrote it. The rhymes just easily fell into place, too. If I could just get more poems to pop out like this one did I could save myself a lot of time. But that would take a lot of fun out of it, too.