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Passing Through With You

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08-03-2023, 08:43 AM

Thanks snapper. I replaced “uncertain” with "now shortens"

ps. I thought that trimeter would add a bit of levity to a worrisome topic.

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Passing Through With You - by Mark A Becker - 01-19-2023, 06:52 AM

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RE: For the Bees - by Mark A Becker - 01-19-2023, 09:11 PM

RE: For the Bees - by RiverNotch - 01-19-2023, 08:05 PM

RE: Passing Through With You - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-03-2023, 06:32 AM

RE: Passing Through With You - by Mark A Becker - 08-03-2023, 08:43 AM

RE: Passing Through With You - by alonso ramoran - 08-23-2023, 05:15 AM

RE: Passing Through With You - by Mark A Becker - 08-23-2023, 05:42 AM

RE: Passing Through With You - by Fearful Symmetry - 09-10-2023, 02:22 PM

RE: Passing Through With You - by bob@mancity.net - 10-10-2023, 09:21 PM

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