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(08-23-2023, 12:10 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Blocked

I'm always too much me;

unshowered, 

unshaved,

in threadbare boxer shorts
with my companion
beer cans and cold pizza
loyally at my side
when the muse pops in to visit.

She never says a word.
Enjoyed the read.  I see a double meaning in that last line: the muse doesn't care how disordered you may be, she still comes to visit and/or she comes but does not inspire (because of the title).

First line really hit home.  Probably not in the way you meant it in the poem, but in my own life.

TqB
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Blocked - by Tiger the Lion - 08-23-2023, 12:10 PM
RE: Blocked - by TranquillityBase - 08-23-2023, 06:24 PM
RE: Blocked - by Quixilated - 08-23-2023, 08:19 PM
RE: Blocked - by Tiger the Lion - 08-24-2023, 04:11 AM
RE: Blocked - by rowens - 08-24-2023, 04:14 AM
RE: Blocked - by Tiger the Lion - 08-24-2023, 05:11 AM
RE: Blocked - by rowens - 08-24-2023, 05:21 AM
RE: Blocked - by Tiger the Lion - 08-24-2023, 05:31 AM
RE: Blocked - by rowens - 08-24-2023, 05:38 AM
RE: Blocked - by Tiger the Lion - 08-24-2023, 05:42 AM
RE: Blocked - by rowens - 08-24-2023, 05:46 AM
RE: Blocked - by Lizzie - 08-24-2023, 05:52 AM
RE: Blocked - by Tiger the Lion - 08-24-2023, 05:58 AM



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