Passing Through With You

Passing Through With You

Fearful Symmetry Offline

“a very handsome boy”

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09-10-2023, 02:22 PM

This poem is wonderful and charming. Its overall jaunty feeling is a fantastic contrast to the ending.

Some flowers don't smell pretty,
but bees don't seem to mind.

Some days weren’t pretty either-
let's leave those all behind.

The road ahead now shortens,
so what else can we find?

Inevitably, flowers-
will they be yours, or mine?

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Passing Through With You - by Mark A Becker - 01-19-2023, 06:52 AM

RE: For the Bees - by TranquillityBase - 01-19-2023, 10:02 AM

RE: For the Bees - by Mark A Becker - 01-19-2023, 09:11 PM

RE: For the Bees - by RiverNotch - 01-19-2023, 08:05 PM

RE: Passing Through With You - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 08-03-2023, 06:32 AM

RE: Passing Through With You - by Mark A Becker - 08-03-2023, 08:43 AM

RE: Passing Through With You - by alonso ramoran - 08-23-2023, 05:15 AM

RE: Passing Through With You - by Mark A Becker - 08-23-2023, 05:42 AM

RE: Passing Through With You - by Fearful Symmetry - 09-10-2023, 02:22 PM

RE: Passing Through With You - by bob@mancity.net - 10-10-2023, 09:21 PM

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