Khepri

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Khepri

Look at the dung beetle;

pushing his little ball of shit
in a perfect straight line
whatever obstacle or incline
might tempt him to veer.
 
The Milky Way his map,
his intent both simple and alien--
his godlike will
once worshipped.

Are you not more valuable than he?




*** with appropriate credit to Matthew 6:26

This is great, it takes a unique perspective by using the image of a dung beetle to convey deeper reflections. The use of the dung beetle as a metaphor is striking, drawing parallels between its seemingly mundane task and the grandeur of the Milky Way. It invites readers to contemplate the simplicity and purpose in the beetle’s actions, and the connection to the Milky Way adds depth, tying the beetle’s existence to cosmic elements.
The reference to the beetle’s godlike will suggests a philosophical angle, prompting readers to question the nature of value and divine intent, and thhe direct question at the end engages the reader, challenging them to reflect on their own worth in comparison to the beetle. This brings a personal touch to the poem and encourages introspection.
The brevity of the poem is wonderful and contributes to its impact. Each line serves a purpose, and the poem maintains focus on the metaphorical exploration without unnecessary embellishments.

Overall, it brilliantly uses metaphor and symbolism to prompt contemplation on the simplicity and cosmic significance of seemingly small actions, leaving readers with a thought-provoking question.