09-01-2024, 07:21 PM
(07-05-2024, 06:00 PM)Safwan Sayan Wrote: The heights of the world didn't scare me
But the terror in your eyes, sickened the soul out mine.
"the height of the world didn't scare me" is a good metaphor to say you are not afraid of much.
In second line you could elaborate the 'terror' of what,And instead of using sickened use some thing that relates to the rest of the poem.
feel free to take it however you want.