Beautiful

[Shahzareth]

Hi guys,




First time poster here. Can you please give me your thoughts on this poem? Please be honest, thank you.



Beautiful



You are beautiful because your eyes are lovely 




You are beautiful because you look unbelievably good in your new dress




You are beautiful because your lips are so amazing to kiss




You are beautiful because you are fearfully and wonderfully made




You are beautiful because your skin is so soft




You are beautiful because you have the most perfect... (LOL .. OK I deleted a couple of lines and stopped this section)




Please know you are beautiful

Too simple,Sounds more like statements,You need to use metaphors in a more creative way
for example you could say: 
You are beautiful because your skin is as soft as a tortise shell.