09-03-2024, 09:30 AM
Hello, and welcome,
Your shivering voice asks, "Do you love the rain as much as I do?"
I reply, "I love it all."
That last line reveals some serious gas lighting by the N. Perhaps you could end it with something like:
"Don't you just love the rain?"
That way, readers can infer that there may be problems between N and the other person, which may be more than their reactions to rain.
The contrasting views could be made sharper with further editing.
Your shivering voice asks, "Do you love the rain as much as I do?"
I reply, "I love it all."
That last line reveals some serious gas lighting by the N. Perhaps you could end it with something like:
"Don't you just love the rain?"
That way, readers can infer that there may be problems between N and the other person, which may be more than their reactions to rain.
The contrasting views could be made sharper with further editing.