two gloves

[Mark A Becker]

Hi Mark,
Nice piece.  Though I hope it isn't foreshadowing!  I need you to stick around or my poems will just get longer and longer!
One small suggestion would be to make "In Memory of Me" the title and just shift the phrasing accordingly.  
Thanks for the read,
steve

Hello Steve,
I plan on being around to bother you.
I changed the title, and made another edit, too.
Thanks for that suggestion.
Mark