09-20-2024, 02:30 PM
Really nice poem.
Like the title change, it gives it more focus.
I prefer the inclusion of 'on a cool' in the first version. It's more evocative.
Like the title change, it gives it more focus.
I prefer the inclusion of 'on a cool' in the first version. It's more evocative.
wae aye man ye radgie