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[Knot]

Hi Mark,
the title change lift this considerably. I also agree with AR about 'cool green'. I do wonder if you need 'in memory of  me' - it seems a bit heavy handed.
Just a thought.

Someday, I hope you’ll see
a cloudless evening
and us, standing out back ..................... do wonder if 'standing' isn't a little static?
on a cool green patch of grass,
just playing catch.


Best, Knot

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