09-21-2024, 06:52 AM
(09-21-2024, 02:11 AM)Bunx Wrote: Seasonal SentimentalWith the title and seasonal reference, this is quite an agreeable haiku/love poem... even without understanding what "scarid" means in this context. Now that I've looked it up, the image of a parrot-fish nibbling on a corral (who is nibbler, speaker or spoken-to?) will remain after the mystery is resolved.
Hold me if you want,
your boundaries are scarid too.
Bloom seasonally.
I wonder what other poems could be improved, or founded on a single word of mysterious meaning... the ay you let me touch your gaste (sic).
Non-practicing atheist

