Seasonal Sentimental
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(09-21-2024, 02:11 AM)Bunx Wrote:  Seasonal Sentimental 

Hold me if you want,
your boundaries are scarid too.
Bloom seasonally.
With the title and seasonal reference, this is quite an agreeable haiku/love poem... even without understanding what "scarid" means in this context.  Now that I've looked it up, the image of a parrot-fish nibbling on a corral  (who is nibbler, speaker or spoken-to?) will remain after the mystery is resolved.

I wonder what other poems could be improved, or founded on a single word of mysterious meaning... the ay you let me touch your gaste (sic).
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Seasonal Sentimental - by Bunx - 09-21-2024, 02:11 AM
RE: Seasonal Sentimental - by dukealien - 09-21-2024, 06:52 AM
RE: Seasonal Sentimental - by Bunx - 09-21-2024, 08:12 AM
RE: Seasonal Sentimental - by dukealien - 09-21-2024, 10:45 AM
RE: Seasonal Sentimental - by Bunx - 09-21-2024, 11:48 AM



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