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Hey Busker! An interesting idea, I have been writing a lot of instumental solo music on my bass guitar but was hmm'ing a melody about this comment this morning. I can see when your coming from.

Thank for the feedback!

(09-22-2024, 10:21 AM)Bunx Wrote:  Hey Val thanks for taking the time to point out some edits and typos... Cellphone poetry sheesh I'm trying haha.

I meant to put "lead" in regards to missing indigenous women and children symbolized by a red hand covering a face. It is supposed to be like "white people won't fix their own sins out of embarrassment"
Suite dies mean hotel alluding to a business meeting.

Happy writing Val

I worked on my word choice and am thinking they are improvements so far
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Messages In This Thread
Missing - by Bunx - 09-22-2024, 12:54 AM
RE: Missing - by Valerie Please - 09-22-2024, 05:30 AM
RE: Missing - by Bunx - 09-22-2024, 10:21 AM
RE: Missing - by busker - 09-22-2024, 10:54 AM
RE: Missing - by Bunx - 09-22-2024, 10:24 PM



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