Dreams - Edit 1.0

[Bunx]

I agree with the title change it's a vague for such a descriptive poem. I went from reading this in my normal tone. On my second read in my head and under my breath my octave went lower.

I love the theme of one's picture of an older poet (probably annonoymous). Gold is a metaphor for timeless value in juxtaposition to "cold fingers" representing death.

Your poems are dense with Busker with such few words the theme illusionary or others are bold as font.