Tanka?
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I think this is my first Tanka though I may have broken rules. 


Our fortress is grand;
its murderous moat yawns wide 
with death's dark water—
enemies exhaust themselves
debating how to breach it.
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Tanka? - by Tiger the Lion - 09-25-2024, 12:05 PM
RE: Tanka? - by Magpie - 09-25-2024, 03:01 PM



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