Black Sand Beach

[carahmellow]

Holter Dam

Cement blocks underneath torn sneakers.
Breathing air
as thick as
dust.
I stumble as I rust.

Decaying into a withering sidewalk elm,
alive on the top
with us,
red
dye
Buffalo
beneath.

Rubble between our eyes
strolling through
death
I realize.

Dreams are only as they seem.
Meaning is deaths shadow
in; (This line break is throwing me off with the double 'in')

in
the plains failure.
Our delusion,
smoky glass.

from the dark black sand
all colors must
live...

[Video: https://youtu.be/ms2DQp3yKpI?si=eQu80DYfvrsn0w_Z]

I love the message of this poem... I think it is great, though I do think the line breaks are throwing it off bit and its messing with the readability and flow