10-14-2024, 01:43 AM
Not the most intense criticism but I think the title is a little misleading. When I when I first saw the title "Display" I thought shopping, technology like a monitor. I think the title along the lines of "scalpel" or "exhibit A" might be more fitting.
I'm trying to figure out if this is from the point of a medical student or the brain surgeon. The question marks make me nervous brain surgery might be a hobby haha. Anyways loved the poem. I agree with byrn to tighten up the grammar, and topic
I'm trying to figure out if this is from the point of a medical student or the brain surgeon. The question marks make me nervous brain surgery might be a hobby haha. Anyways loved the poem. I agree with byrn to tighten up the grammar, and topic
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx