Flowers
#5
Hey there,

I agree on punctuation, either all or nothing on the below, so ditch the caps or tidy it up Smile

Love the poem though, reads very well and I'm a big fan of the ending:

'But the melting of snow
Will sprout flowers one day'
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Messages In This Thread
Flowers - by DanGWoodle - 09-26-2024, 03:57 AM
RE: Flowers - by Bunx - 09-27-2024, 12:05 AM
RE: Flowers - by carahmellow - 10-08-2024, 11:38 AM
RE: Flowers - by JustSomeRandomGuy - 11-06-2024, 02:36 AM
RE: Flowers - by Meus - 11-12-2024, 08:09 PM
RE: Flowers - by Gerryswo - 11-22-2024, 11:54 PM



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