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Beautiful
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11-28-2024, 08:51 AM
This poem really couldn't keep my attention. Starting each line with "You are beautiful" made me start thinking about other things very quickly. Additionally, I thought you were far too general in your descriptions, bordering on cliches. It didn't feel like you spent much time on the poem, even if you were just testing the waters.
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Beautiful - by bernie99 - 05-27-2017, 05:44 PM
RE: Beautiful - by just mercedes - 05-27-2017, 06:05 PM
RE: Beautiful - by tectak - 05-28-2017, 04:23 AM
RE: Beautiful - by Leanne - 05-28-2017, 04:46 AM
RE: Beautiful - by Vonstevenstien - 05-28-2017, 11:57 PM
RE: Beautiful - by Raspberry Lemonade - 07-19-2017, 12:39 PM
RE: Beautiful - by Ja wangana - 08-03-2017, 06:51 PM
RE: Beautiful - by nibbed - 08-04-2017, 10:31 PM
RE: Beautiful - by Ecesis - 08-08-2017, 04:47 PM
RE: Beautiful - by billy - 08-08-2017, 05:02 PM
RE: Beautiful - by BeauRessa - 08-09-2017, 01:20 PM
RE: Beautiful - by FledglingTroubadour - 08-15-2017, 05:50 PM
RE: Beautiful - by bob@mancity.net - 10-14-2023, 06:40 AM
RE: Beautiful - by Shahzareth - 09-01-2024, 07:45 PM
RE: Beautiful - by Gerryswo - 11-28-2024, 08:51 AM
RE: Beautiful - by ton321 - 12-07-2024, 12:40 PM
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