12-06-2024, 01:50 AM
The nature, to use that word, of your poem is action. Actions not quite punctured by adjectives but are flexed by them.
Poetry is often a gay kind of reflective act. People will criticize overuse of adjectives.
As this is a poem about action, the adjectives may fit in ways that make this poem appropriately have such adjectives.
I mean that.
Poetry is often a gay kind of reflective act. People will criticize overuse of adjectives.
As this is a poem about action, the adjectives may fit in ways that make this poem appropriately have such adjectives.
I mean that.

