Cold Mornings
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For a short poem, “an alchemy of” is too many words IMO
How about ‘writ with anxiety / and caffeine’?
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Cold Mornings - by spencedude75 - 12-09-2024, 01:53 PM
RE: Cold Mornings - by busker - 12-09-2024, 09:49 PM
RE: Cold Mornings - by brynmawr1 - 12-10-2024, 11:12 AM



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