Cold Mornings
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I would go one step further and make the last line the title and incorporate 'cold' into the poem.

eg 
cold we are conjured
writ with anxiety, saved
by the alchemy of caffeine.

play with it.  There is a lot to work with.  nice piece.
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Cold Mornings - by spencedude75 - 12-09-2024, 01:53 PM
RE: Cold Mornings - by busker - 12-09-2024, 09:49 PM
RE: Cold Mornings - by brynmawr1 - 12-10-2024, 11:12 AM



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