02-23-2025, 04:56 AM
Posting here first to get my feet wet, but if it needs more than basic feedback lmk.
Broken blessings read like curses.
Bleeding scars are open wounds.
Rain falls when the sun is shining,
Know The Devil's wife is doomed.
Wanting grasses beg for water.
Dried roots cannot take in pools.
Horses won't drink where you lead them.
Useless waters are false boons.
Winter coat on in the summer,
Where the Sun has met the Moon.
Force can't make a wife a lover.
Fingers rotted her cocoon.
Broken blessings read like curses.
Bleeding scars are open wounds.
Rain falls when the sun is shining,
Know The Devil's wife is doomed.
Wanting grasses beg for water.
Dried roots cannot take in pools.
Horses won't drink where you lead them.
Useless waters are false boons.
Winter coat on in the summer,
Where the Sun has met the Moon.
Force can't make a wife a lover.
Fingers rotted her cocoon.