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[Magpie]

I'm just presuming that your about to critique a poem in this forum, that's how it works.
But anyway here's a couple of things

I can only give so much strength until I break
Until I shatter under the weight
I sit now antipathetic to the cracks which now writhe - careful of big words for the sake of it, do cracks writhe?
For my mental tithe to the void works me down to bone - I've looked up 'tithe' and still none the wiser
Inexorable anxiety about nothing in particular - I like this line
You think yourself more than perpendicular to my trajectory
But the trigonometry that governs our paths through life says otherwise
I will keep on being me - there something about these four lines that shows you've got rhythm and an ear for an internal rhyme - it doesn't all make sense though 
Maybe not here though, i’d like to be elsewhere
Where my entropic probabilities doesn’t bother others
And where I can get away from the chaos here already
So i can stop giving strength to the people that don't matter to me
I’d rather leave than give in to your demands - the last three lines seem to be the crux of what you're trying to say

anyway,

also - is the title a file format?