03-14-2025, 08:13 AM
this is gorgeous
i do agree with the above commenter that the second "if we're a pair" might work better on its own.
i wonder whether "this all-we've-got" should be its own line too? maybe that lends more emphasis on "this love"?
im not sure, but i think it's lovely either way
i do agree with the above commenter that the second "if we're a pair" might work better on its own.
i wonder whether "this all-we've-got" should be its own line too? maybe that lends more emphasis on "this love"?
im not sure, but i think it's lovely either way