03-19-2025, 08:25 PM
(This post was last modified: 03-19-2025, 08:55 PM by Quixilated.)
As it says at the top of every page, and in the rules, and in my note on your last poem, and in the pm i sent that you did not read, you must offer feedback for every poem you post. Before posting any new poems, you must offer feedback for the previous poem you posted, as well as for each new poem. This is the second time you have posted this poem without offering feedback for the first. Please do not post more poems until you have met the feedback requirement.
Thank you,
--Quix
Thank you,
--Quix
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara