Better to Weep - edit

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Better to Weep


To see dried blood upon a handkerchief
reminds us we are not composed of dust
as poets and star-gazers share belief
but, as a plumber knows, of wet and rust.

Red hearts and lips may symbolize true love
as poppies offer sure, narcotic sleep:
affection, somnolence, addictive trove
of past perfection only fools may keep.

To couples courting danger crimson speaks
of hemoglobin rich with oxygen
spilled in despairing suicidal streaks
by lovers lacking cynics’ antigen.

Be brave, my love, let tears flow if you must–
not disappointed blood:  abide and trust.

original version;

To see dried blood upon a handkerchief
reminds us we are not composed of dust
as poets and star-gazers share belief
but, as a plumber knows, of wet and rust.

Red hearts and lips may symbolize true love
in flower, as the poppy posits sleep;
affection, somnolence, addictive trove
of past perfection only fools may keep.

For those alive to danger crimson speaks
of hemoglobin rich with oxygen
spilled wildly or through suicidal leaks
by lovers lacking cynics’ antigen.

Be brave, my love, let tears flow if you must
instead of anguished blood, that lust of rust.