sewage drains
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Hi, I feel like what you're trying to say is restricted by the rhymes you chose. You need to give it some space, let it breath. I'd love to see what this looks likes when you've smoothed out the kinks. Best, Eden
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sewage drains - by midnightcowboy - 02-14-2025, 04:15 AM
RE: sewage drains - by carahmellow - 02-14-2025, 07:01 AM
RE: sewage drains - by midnightcowboy - 02-21-2025, 01:21 PM
RE: sewage drains - by PoetryfromtheSoul - 02-15-2025, 01:40 AM
RE: sewage drains - by midnightcowboy - 02-20-2025, 03:10 AM
RE: sewage drains - by Mark A Becker - 02-20-2025, 08:25 AM
RE: sewage drains - by midnightcowboy - 02-21-2025, 01:56 AM
RE: sewage drains - by Jamiefarmer - 02-21-2025, 02:44 PM
RE: sewage drains - by Poet-dude-ig - 03-13-2025, 10:47 AM
RE: sewage drains - by edeno - 03-30-2025, 07:27 AM



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