Perfection

[poetry_zealot]

gaping holes

inadequately stitched
by fraying strings 
I think my issue here is there are a lot of verbs but no verb, gaping, Stitched, fraying, all adjectives?

the needle swims is this the needle that stitched them? Thars the verb
through flesh
then tugs at
forgotten heartstrings are these old strings the needle stitched?


seams meld with flesh
becoming flawless scars

evidence of imaginary trials 


a smile
my smile so I'm lost now, I've sewn the lips shut, flesh seams, 
the teeth are still slightly
crooked what do the teeth have to do it with? These the gaping holes sewn shut

Insecurities? Scars. Teeth, holes, trials
Just sharing my thought process when reading it
Thanks for sharing 

Thanks for your feedback. Will consider the points you have made.