Scars

[brynmawr1]

Scars are my tattoos.
On my body; on my soul
They tell my story.

Hi Lynn,

Forgive the rewrite but this is how I see it.

Scars are my tattoos
on the body of my soul-
a story untold

I guess my point is try to be more circumspect.  Play around with it.  You've got a lot to work with.
Bryn