Leaving Summerland
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(04-16-2025, 10:00 PM)rowens Wrote:  But the best, if puny, trick of this poem only exists depending on how fast someone reads the linebreak between the last two lines.
Excellent line break there; I paused briefly the first time through, then turned to the last line quicker on second read.

Most everything in society is codified: laws, signs, language, speed limits, etc... I try to be aware of my code of conduct depending upon the situation, and the company I'm in. While my demeanor can be described as offensive at times, I don't approach situations with malicious intent.

I'd like to see more of these short ones from you Thumbsup
...Mark
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Leaving Summerland - by rowens - 04-15-2025, 01:09 AM
RE: Leaving Summerland - by dukealien - 04-16-2025, 05:23 AM
RE: Leaving Summerland - by Mark A Becker - 04-16-2025, 09:14 PM
RE: Leaving Summerland - by rowens - 04-16-2025, 10:00 PM
RE: Leaving Summerland - by Mark A Becker - 04-17-2025, 12:45 AM
RE: Leaving Summerland - by rowens - 04-17-2025, 02:01 AM
RE: Leaving Summerland - by Mark A Becker - 04-17-2025, 02:46 AM



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