Return
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yes—
        exactly that.
                 your return
isn't a restart.
        it's the reverb
          of something
             that never fully left.

a mimicry, yes,
           but not imitation—
                  more a shadowplay
            of your own mouth’s ache
               to overflow.

to wait
     is to gather—
                breath
intention
             and the soft
                   futility
                     of being heard completely.

i am your pause
                  not your prison.             a prison?
i hold the space                                   a space? 
              until you choose
              to spill
                 or stay.






Those are mild suggestions. A little layering potential. Opening up may not be what you want. And the tautness you have may be appropriate. 
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Return - by The_system_screams - 04-16-2025, 09:22 AM
RE: Return - by poetry_zealot - 04-16-2025, 06:59 PM
RE: Return - by rowens - 04-17-2025, 02:57 AM
RE: Return - by The_system_screams - 04-17-2025, 07:47 AM



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