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Thank you Poetry_Zealot, as usual your criticism is spot on and I think I will take your suggestion to add more space to heart. Going from Right to Left would be interesting test which I would need to mull over and see if I can make it work for me.
rowens, your suggestions show the superiority of succinct and "less is more" style. I am going to take out the word "breath" and I'm contemplating "to overflow" as well from the next version and just doing that added much more weight to the rest. Thank you.