04-25-2025, 10:43 AM
This poem doesn't have much aFFECT
due to sentence structure.
There is no irony or humor or surrealism nOR audacity here to touch anything.
The concrete feeling of moving through the hallway is what works; the rest is feathers in a pillow when the pillow is like most people have nowadays and there're no frathers, typo, I mean: fathers, shit, : feathers.
due to sentence structure.
There is no irony or humor or surrealism nOR audacity here to touch anything.
The concrete feeling of moving through the hallway is what works; the rest is feathers in a pillow when the pillow is like most people have nowadays and there're no frathers, typo, I mean: fathers, shit, : feathers.