04-25-2025, 10:47 AM
It's yer poem, pebble,
This reader got the point within the first couple of lines. After that the repetition just got tedious.Especially when read aloud.Long is fine, but repeated repetition, not so much. Maybe it'll work better for other readers. Read it aloud, and see how it sounds to you, and listen for places for possible changes.
This reader got the point within the first couple of lines. After that the repetition just got tedious.Especially when read aloud.Long is fine, but repeated repetition, not so much. Maybe it'll work better for other readers. Read it aloud, and see how it sounds to you, and listen for places for possible changes.