04-26-2025, 03:24 PM
I second Mark's point.
I cannot discern a method in how the dialogues have been broken up across lines. Just have the point and counterpoint on separate lines, and it's easy to read
Even so, the Q&A isn't particularly interesting and comes off at as a vague attempt at philosophising. There isn't enough poetry in it.
“are you still there?”
“i am somewhere else”
“but i still move, i still breathe.”
“you simply mimic what hasn’t left”
I cannot discern a method in how the dialogues have been broken up across lines. Just have the point and counterpoint on separate lines, and it's easy to read
Even so, the Q&A isn't particularly interesting and comes off at as a vague attempt at philosophising. There isn't enough poetry in it.
“are you still there?”
“i am somewhere else”
“but i still move, i still breathe.”
“you simply mimic what hasn’t left”