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Pisces' Defeat

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05-14-2025, 09:02 AM

(05-14-2025, 03:50 AM)rowens Wrote: Not Neptune, buddy. You got Jupiter in yer corner.

I'll give a proper critique.

Hold on about an hour.

No rush, take your time! Big Grin

I used Neptune because it is considered the modern ruler of Pisces, and Jupiter also rules Sagittarius, which could be confusing.

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Pisces' Defeat - by Semele - 05-14-2025, 03:14 AM

RE: Pisces' Defeat - by rowens - 05-14-2025, 03:50 AM

RE: Pisces' Defeat - by Semele - 05-14-2025, 09:02 AM

RE: Pisces' Defeat - by rowens - 05-14-2025, 08:35 AM

RE: Pisces' Defeat - by rowens - 05-14-2025, 09:23 AM

RE: Pisces' Defeat - by RiverNotch - 05-15-2025, 06:46 PM

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