05-15-2025, 11:41 PM
New draft. Would appreciate any feedback on scene pacing and descriptive and narrative clarity. General impressions are also welcome. Thank you!
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Revealing Mass Prologue (v2) - by alonso ramoran - 04-25-2025, 09:41 AM
RE: Revealing Mass Prologue (v2) - by alonso ramoran - 05-15-2025, 11:41 PM
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