05-18-2025, 12:49 AM
I found it interesting that in the first two verses you used rhyme (abab) then in the last one you went away from that. was it on purpose? This is more of a question than a critique. as I just wondered.
most kids groan when they do hear there is going to be poetry unless it more nonsense based (jabbawocky) then they really get it. I admit it would be great if they could listen to othertypes. I digress, sorry adhd brain.
"unbedazzled by Dante's rhyme" v nice. Sums up that the more esoteric poems out there are of no use to children. Thumbs Up!
most kids groan when they do hear there is going to be poetry unless it more nonsense based (jabbawocky) then they really get it. I admit it would be great if they could listen to othertypes. I digress, sorry adhd brain.
"unbedazzled by Dante's rhyme" v nice. Sums up that the more esoteric poems out there are of no use to children. Thumbs Up!