Untitled - suggestions for a name are welcome
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Great poem, it's very mythic. The dialogue feels very natural yet poetic at the same time. I can't think of anything i'd really change/critique except for what the other commenter said, the addition of "so..." would make it hit a bit harder. As for a title, maybe "You&Me"?
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RE: Untitled - suggestions for a name are welcome - by meadzbabyy - 05-23-2025, 09:14 AM



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