The liar

[Natangwe]

Hey Natangwe, here are my thoughts

in s1 L8 not sure if "loose" is supposed to be "lose"
I like how this poem gets inside the mind of the person depicted as evil or manipulative.
It humanizes them and tries to interpret their actions, while not necessarily asking for the reader to show them pity.
Kind of reminds me of notes from the underground or picture of dorian gray, lolita etc.

Hey Harroldinho, 
Thanks for the feedback . l meant to write "to lose" yes, but "too loose" also seems interesting, maybe I will reconsider. And I will definetly have to read notes from the underground, it sounds interesting.