05-30-2025, 10:24 AM
Thanks for the feedback meadz, especially your input about the last line. I was curious if it worked or was too much.
Time is the best editor.
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2nd Draft: Buying Love Poetry at a Thrift Store - by Richard - 05-29-2025, 12:28 PM
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