The sleepless fly (?)
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You rely on your own taste when it comes to rhythms and sonics. Condensing lines can help focus on clarity and add to figurative language devices. Why a fly, why a giant, why abundance, why quiet? The interplay of sonics and figurative texture. How can you carry the symbols and sounds throughout the poem, not simply throwing in aspects that don't carry on the poetic thread?
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The sleepless fly (?) - by Natangwe - 06-19-2025, 07:25 AM
RE: The sleepless fly (?) - by rowens - 06-25-2025, 04:24 AM
RE: The sleepless fly (?) - by Natangwe - 06-25-2025, 07:46 AM
RE: The sleepless fly (?) - by rowens - 06-25-2025, 08:58 AM



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