06-30-2025, 05:26 AM
The repetitive rhymes can work given the enclosed theme.
The ideas that each line expresses seem haphazardly chosen such that the poem is thematically weak.
The theme of living in a bubble could be said in one sentence, the poem not adding anything beyond that prosaic statement.
The ideas that each line expresses seem haphazardly chosen such that the poem is thematically weak.
The theme of living in a bubble could be said in one sentence, the poem not adding anything beyond that prosaic statement.