07-20-2025, 12:15 PM
Hypothetical sonic nuances and condensing.
A Good Buzz
It’s the lazy hum
of the summer grasshoppers,
gently crafting a world
'the' is creating a separate world too soon
where all that is joyous
lies within your grasp—
if only you remain there,
to absorb that euphoric,
purring symphony
indefinitely.
Play with the last few lines above. I'd say "the euphoria." and end the stanza there. Consider why, if you like; and play with your own understandings.
So You attempt to cage them
and their harmonious offerings,
one by one,
until the whimsical buzz
erupts into disjointed,
frenzied chaos.
Simply consider the dynamics.
A Good Buzz
It’s the lazy hum
of the summer grasshoppers,
gently crafting a world
'the' is creating a separate world too soon
where all that is joyous
lies within your grasp—
if only you remain there,
to absorb that euphoric,
purring symphony
indefinitely.
Play with the last few lines above. I'd say "the euphoria." and end the stanza there. Consider why, if you like; and play with your own understandings.
So You attempt to cage them
and their harmonious offerings,
one by one,
until the whimsical buzz
erupts into disjointed,
frenzied chaos.
Simply consider the dynamics.