Chase and Withdraw
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Certainly getting all the pictures here, but failing (my failure!) to put the story together.  Sleeping pills?  Other medications, licit or il-?

Only one line with actual confusion - in l.6 I wanted it to say *give* fire rather than "take."  An obscure reference from the days of matchlocks and flintlocks.

Well done, expressing the mood.
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Chase and Withdraw - by Semicircle - 07-23-2025, 07:43 AM
RE: Chase and Withdraw - by dukealien - 07-25-2025, 01:19 AM



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