Evening Romance
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Do the L's, F's and N's have further significance?

The part that stands out is the first line of the second stanza where the L L L gives way or takes to F.

When you go all the way with such an angle, the only critique could be with small connective details, the most small and subtle word choices. To enrich the power within the gimmick.
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Evening Romance - by Rcklay - 07-30-2025, 08:57 AM
RE: Madam Romance - by rowens - 07-30-2025, 11:41 PM
RE: Madam Romance - by Rcklay - 07-31-2025, 01:41 AM
RE: Madam Romance - by dukealien - 07-31-2025, 06:32 AM
RE: Madam Romance - by Rcklay - 08-01-2025, 06:02 AM



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